Here are a few things I look for in good fiction:
Style. It's got to be well-written. Know the rules of punctuation and grammar before you break them--or use them in the first place.
Plot. Who doesn't love a great storyline!
Characters. There's nothing I enjoy more than a well-invented character with a detailed backstory and intriguing personality.
Originality. If it's just one more of the same, I'm not interested, no matter how well-written.
Pace. Keep it moving! Otherwise I get bored.
Message. I'm particularly interested in stories with a strong, moral message. Otherwise, what's the point of writing?
These are a few things that will turn me away from a piece of writing:
Vulgar. If you can't keep it clean, it won't hold my interest. This includes homosexuality, sexuality in general, sorcery, horror, and gore.
Long paragraphs. My attention span, unfortunately, doesn't exceed half a page of solid text.
Passive voice. Especially in the first sentence. If you don't know the difference between active and passive voice, check out this article: [link]
Lengthy description and narration. Keep it concise! My attention span again.
Unbelievability. Fiction doesn't have to be realist to be believable, but it does have to be consistent and logical.
All right, off to talent scout!





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By the way, you seem to be someone who's very interested in writing. Well, I'm not interested in writing (I am just interested in common errors made in the English language and I do feel annoyed seeing them), but I'd like to recommend this site: [link]
It's one of my favorite sites out there, and I thought you might be interested.
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